Wednesday, April 7, 2010

The Dingo and the poisme


Once a upon time there was a Dingo named Max he lets of friends one Day Max came To a river white had a poisme and he lived there then the he said hey My name is one. What is your name. My name is Max How are you going said Max good said one.then Max said where am I said Max one said you are at The Maige River said what ever you say well come true. Real said Max I love this place. I wish that Me and one can swim in your River and came true. Then When they got in. There was something was in the river. one said lets go in no said Max There is something in the river and then a cocillde Jumped out of the river.and crid To eat them. then one jumped in the river. Max said no don,t jump in. there is a cocillde tring to eat Us so said one we can just swim home. and who keas said one. Max crid to stop one but one did not lesson To Max. then one got out and jumped back in. then one looked back. and then saw the cocillde behinde him and saw the cocillde. then Max got one out of the River. then one said sorry I didn,t see the cocillde do you forgive Me for doing that then they had a good time after all THE END

1 comment:

  1. I am so sad that One didn't listen to Max. If One had listened to Max then the crocodile would not have eaten him.

    Just like we don't have to listen to stinky feet (Satan) when he tells us to do things that will hurt our heart and other people's hearts.

    I love you Princess Sarah Jo xoxoxoxoxoxo

    You are a great writer.

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